Hi, my name is Ryan Mueller, and I am currently a college student and an aspiring author. I would like to use this blog to showcase some examples of my writing and receive feedback about things I can improve. My current projects include a four-book fantasy series (if you visit Evil Editor or PhoenixSullivan, you might have seen my horrid attempts at query letters) and a few others on which I have just started scratching the surface.
I will soon post some sample chapters from the first book in this series. I have been told it's full of cliches, so if anyone has advice on de-clicheifying it (yes, I know that's not a word), I would greatly appreciate it.
Well, I hope everyone enjoys the blog (that is, if anyone actually reads it).
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ReplyDeleteThanks for the comments. I'll look out for those cliche wordings in my writing. I don't particularly care for reading them either, and I've eliminated quite a few during the editing process.
ReplyDeleteI'll change it to "scraping his muscular arm." Was that the only real issue you noticed? If so, that makes me feel good about that chapter. Of course, that is also the chapter I've probably edited about a thousand times by now.
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